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What is the correct way to rewrite Sentence 5?

A Inside the cave, I saw the most beautiful crystalline structures (the likes of which I’d never seen before) instead of the macabre stalactites and enormous spiders I was expecting.

This sentence contains too many dependent clauses and is clunky to read. Simplify it by moving and condensing the clauses and putting excess material in parenthesis.

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